Said is Dead
The subject came up one day in
our discussion group about how to coax students into writing with
more interesting words and phrases. Isobel shared a list of words
that she had developed, with the help of Avis and Marcia, that could
replace the word "said" in the students' writing. I'm sure
you'll find many here that you could share with your own students! A
good idea is to put the words up on a poster in your room so that
students may refer to it while they are writing. Bob, Marcia and
Isobel also added words that could describe HOW something is said.
Those words/phrases are included at the end of the list. Helen
thought of a few more "all too common" words that she
would like to see abolished. Those words, and ideas for catchy
titles may also be found below.
A
accused added ad-libbed
admitted advised affirmed agreed alleged announced answered argued
articulated asked asserted assumed assured attacked averred
B
babbled balked bantered barked
bawled beckoned begged bellowed blabbed blasted blubbered blurted
boasted boomed bragged brayed breathed bubbled
C
cackled called chanted
chattered chimed chirped chortled chuckled choked commanded
commented complained consoled continued cooed corrected cracked
cried crowed
D
dared debated declared
declined decried deduced defended deferred delivered demanded denied
denounced described dictated directed divulged drawled
E
echoed emitted emphasized
encouraged enunciated exclaimed exhorted explained exploded
expressed
G
gabbed gasped giggled gossiped
grinned groaned growled grumbled grunted
H
hesitated hinted hissed
hollered howled hummed
I
imparted implied indicated
insisted instructed interjected interrupted invited
J
jawed joked joshed justified
L
laughed lied lamented
M
maintained mentioned mimicked
moaned mouthed mumbled muttered
N
nagged niggled noted
O
objected observed ordered
P
panted pattered persisted
persuaded phrased pipedpleaded positioned prattled preached
predicted proclaimed pronounced proposed protested puffed
Q
queried questioned quipped
quizzed quoted
R
ranted reasoned recalled
recited refused related relayed reflected remarked reminded repeated
replied reported responded restated retorted roared
S
scoffed scolded screamed
screeched shouted shrieked sighed snapped snarled snickered sniffed
snorted sobbed sounded specified speculated spewed spieled spoke
sputtered squawked squeaked squealed stammered stated stressed
stuttered submitted suggested
T
tattled teased testified
thanked thought thundered told
U
urged uttered
W
wailed warbled wept whimpered
whined whispered whistled wondered
V
verbalized vocalized voiced
vowed
Y
yapped yawned yelled yelped
Okay, now that we know HOW to
say SAID, how do we say it better? Try adding a few of these to your
writing:
| with great
vigor |
carefully |
hospitably |
| behind her
back |
furtively |
responsibly |
| despairingly |
abusively |
worriedly |
| wearily |
morosely |
dismissively |
| enthusiastically |
timidly |
amiably |
| hoarsely |
honestly |
slowly |
| lovingly |
reasonably |
gently |
| pleasantly |
quickly |
sharply |
| turning
around |
softly |
unreasonably |
| with mouth
full |
angrily |
under her
breath |
Don't forget these
"over-used" words!
VERY and FUN
How about "Bury
Very" and "Fun is Done" for titles?
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